January 31, 2010

Poems...and, a question for you:

Can a poem be sexy & morbid at the same time????...Jeepers! I've got to keep writing to get better.

Click the title of this post. I'd like to hear your opinion on my latest poem--(the video, by the Yeah,Yeah,Yeahs is a good one too!)

`x`Abe's Heart.


kold_kadavr_ flatliner said...

That's awwwsome...
if you dont believe
in a God who loves you
and wants to see you
literally wiseabove;
yet, alas! O poor, poor Yorick!!
There's a Trinity and He shall
cast-you-away from Him if you
dont follow His rules
(God never sends anyone to Hell;
we mortal sinners do
by our 'laissez-faire' attitude).
Follow us on the journey Upstairs:

I'd looove to meet you
in Seventh-Heaven...
yet, you first must be prepared:

Find-out what RCIA means... and join;
classes are free, starting September.
Aint no joke, earthling:
our indelible soul is on the line.
What's 77ish years compared to
the length N breadth of eternity?
What's the Tyranny of Progressivism
compared to the saving of our soul?

Doesnt make any difference
if you're an atheist;
doesn't make a whole-hilla-beans
wortha difference when you croak.
You'll be crying-out for JEEE-SIS!!!
...yet, if you've been a non-believer
your entire, finite existence,
Jesus maaay not hear you.
Billions of everlasting souls
are now in Hellfire without
the basic nessecities for eternity.
Are you actually willing
to take THAT risk of being condemned?

Again, Jesus laughs when you
should've learned the
meaning of wisdom N discernment,
mortal sinner... as am I.
Im not better than you...
yet, I gotta lotta d'knowlijj
which'll save-your-soul, kapiche??
Sorry for the New Yoirk accent.
Again, find-out what RCIA means.

Make Your Choice -SAW

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