dropping commas:

Commas!

Sometimes, there are too many.
I'm learning--
really, I am--

to be
more aware.

**
Let me tell you, --
Between you
and I:

There's nothing more simple
than dropping commas.

Even when things
seem meaningless

one should try to

breathe

easier.









~x~ SinfullyAnon. 10/04/08-2:34AM